Thats great Horus!
Im happy to see more people stepping up with videos!
If I may give you some advice:
You need to capture the attention of the viewer in the first 10 sec.
"Presenting...
Artemis Division"
"Best Damn RP group ever!"
Call to action needs to be right at the start!
Some text in the first 40 sec of the video explaining what we are looking at:
"Supported by 4000 members"
"Most active organization in the game!"
"All time zines, all nationalities"
"Join today!"
- What is the message you are trying to portray?
The first 4:30 is the generic footage we have all seen 1000 times, why is your video different?
Explain it early and fast!
- Give some text references to scenes, eg planet in the horizon "Explore new worlds!"
- Bengal scene "Defend our military assets!" etc
