Nice video, and not only for the fact that is the first pubblished one: I find it polished, whitout any flashy content that most of the time I see on new content creator, and a clean look help to give a senze of professionalism.
Regarding the content is nice to see some critics on new ships and content in general: most of the time content focus on the hype for the new model or mechanics, having a cold-mind evaluation on even the cons is a great value IMHO. STLyoungblood always do some video on new ship on a "should you buy" theme and I think they are a good point for a reflection, you are setting it up on the same line.
Now some suggestion.
A ferewell and a "thanks for viewing" at the end of the video is nice, I think it give the feeling to the oudience that the one they just watch is not a single one-of video but there will be more in the future. I think it will encurage viwers to keep an eye out for your content.
Regarding ship specifically, while the Jax video are greate (I agree, the most fun part of IAE) for a long video like this try to incude more content of the ship itself, like the image of the brochure with the ships schematics, since you are talking about the over-abundant of feature while lack exploration, shiowing the interior maps whold have strengted this concept and also kept the focus on the screen rater then pay casually attention to the voice.